Here is a great tool for writers: the bus test. It is a quirky way to measure the value and emotional depth of your characters. I do not agree that a reader has to “become” a character. In fact I find that idea preposterous in most cases, since fictional characters are by their very nature unreachable. How can someone know what it is to be an alien, or a wizard, or even a killer? Even the author doesn’t really know. The best you can hope for is empathy, for your reader to understand the character’s struggles and feel for them, not to put themselves in the character’s shoes.
Besides that point, I like what this little article has to say and I think it is a good tool to add to your box.
By Mike Cluff
Do me a favor and read this first paragraph from a story:
Alley sat on a park bench. She sat there eating a taco. She hated tacos. Just like she hated Jim. But she couldn’t resist either one. They were both so beefy and greasy. Alley had to call Becky and tell her how much she was looking forward to going shopping. She needed a new pair of skinny jeans. Alley started texting instead. She stood up, and as she crossed the street a bus rounded the corner and flattened her. End.
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